From df1edd76f66b33eabe72cc7cbf656fddf7f72bea Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Andrea Greco Date: Tue, 10 Oct 2023 12:13:49 +0200 Subject: Correct (hopefully) all grammar mistakes and change phrasing to make things easier to understand (#282) * First part of grammar correction * Final part of grammar correction * Update _ont/ont-fs-com-gpon-onu-stick-with-mac.md Co-authored-by: Simone <26844016+simonebortolin@users.noreply.github.com> * Update _ont/ont-fs-com-gpon-onu-stick-with-mac.md Co-authored-by: Simone <26844016+simonebortolin@users.noreply.github.com> --------- Co-authored-by: Simone <26844016+simonebortolin@users.noreply.github.com> --- _ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a-rooted.md | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) (limited to '_ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a-rooted.md') diff --git a/_ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a-rooted.md b/_ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a-rooted.md index 1b7e97d..ab60890 100644 --- a/_ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a-rooted.md +++ b/_ont/ont-huawei-ma5671a-rooted.md @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ For general use, minishell does not allow any modifications and [Web root proced # GPON ONU status -## Get the operational status of the ONU +## Getting the operational status of the ONU ```sh onu ploamsg @@ -33,12 +33,12 @@ Where `MIB_IDX` is the MIB ID and `ME_IN` is the ME instance number # GPON/OMCI settings -{% include alert.html content="In this firmware, unlike the other ones, the data must be modified in a base64-encoded file. To simplify this, you can use the following web application." alert="Info" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} +{% include alert.html content="In this firmware, unlike the other ones, all data must be modified in a base64-encoded file. To simplify this, you can use the following web application." alert="Info" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} ## Web procedure -1. Get `fw_printenv sfp_a2_info` and paste into the form +1. Get `fw_printenv sfp_a2_info` and paste into the form:
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ Where `MIB_IDX` is the MIB ID and `ME_IN` is the ME instance number -{% include alert.html content="Executing these commands requires a minimum of familiarity with `vim`. If you do not know `vim`, follow the commands precisely." alert="Danger" icon="svg-warning" color="red" %} +{% include alert.html content="Executing these commands requires familiarity with `vim`. If you are not in any way familiar with `vim`, follow these commands precisely." alert="Danger" icon="svg-warning" color="red" %} {:style="counter-reset:none"} 1. Copy the script's output to the clipboard @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ AAAAAAAAAAJIV1RDESIzRP///////////////////wAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA 00000000000000024857544311223344ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff0000000000000000000000000000 ``` -The entire S/N, including the PON ID, is encoded first in hexadecimal and then in base64 +The entire S/N, including the PON ID, is first encoded in hexadecimal and then in base64 3. Setting PLOAM Password @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ ffffffffffffffff00021437d77db7df7e37e77eb7ef7f37f77d0000000000000000000000000000 //////////8AAhQ31323334353637383930AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ``` -The entire PLOAM, is encoded first in hexadecimal and then in base64 +The entire PLOAM, is first encoded in hexadecimal and then in base64 4. Setting MAC Address @@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ The `link_status` variable tells the current speed | 4 | 1 Gbps / SGMII with auto-neg off | | 5 | 2.5 Gbps / HSGMII with auto-neg on | -To change the default lan mode value you can use `fw_setenv sgmii_mode`. The firmware already has the value 5 by default and it is generally not necessary to change it. +To change the default lan mode value you can use `fw_setenv sgmii_mode`. The firmware is already set to 2.5G auto-negotiation, you shouldn't touch it. # Advanced settings -- cgit v1.2.3